Category: Writers Block
So I anagrammed my full name, and got some interesting words and phrases. I decided to make a poem around those words. But I'm thinking this needs some revision.
Beasts race across the acres as beams clear east,
The shadow of the bare stone castle darkening their trail.
And high she stands upon north tower, breathing in the dawn.
A celebrate silent mass for the demons who beset her.
The same old bracelet,
The gilded lace,
The echo of a fairy tale,
And a lover’s warm embrace.
A breathless darkness
Enslaving her mind
As she closed her eyes
And fell.
Into the sea, awaiting calmly,
Through the late summer’s newborn wind.
And late by far came tear threaded words
soft and sorrowfully released to the day.
Upon tower left empty and shrouded in mist,
He surveyed the fields, the waters below.
“One if by land and two if by sea.”
And so he stepped onto the edge,
And so he remembered her broken smile.
Beasts race across the acres as beams clear west.
The shadow of the stone castle foretelling his fate.
And so he breathed in the dying day,
And so he swayed on the upper most spire.
And through the air scented with wine,
He fell into the ocean’s embrace.
beams
Clear
East
Beasts
Race
Bracelet
Bare
Castle
Celebrate
Beset
Lace
Tale
Late
Sea
Calm
Tear
acres
there are a couple of bits that are odd, but it's really good as usual. how long did it take you to write after you got the list of words? and thanks for sharing, I always enjoy your poems.
hmm, I think it took fourty five minutes at most? When I sit down to write a poem, it flows easily.
and thanks. I know some bits are off. :)
Truly a Creative Writing piece. Even with words assiged as it were yet still the full flavor of your own style of a way with words comes through... Like the line about the gilded lace, I know from other writings this thot conveyed.
What is so neat is remembering you are speaking of beetles and not persons...
The phrase "love bugs" comes to mind. Smile